Ranked by what each change is worth on the composite — the gap to the next rung of the ladder times the dimension’s weight. Computed from the scores, not written by the model; the model’s sentence under each is the action.
Replace the headline with a concrete product noun or product category in plain words.
remove non-informative abstractions and clearly name the product category.
Add a direct sign-up or try-now CTA tied to a specific feature or product.
All three together: 60 → 70. Every dimension one rung up: 72 (grade B). Ceiling is 95.
Built only from facts already on the page — not the company’s words. Shown so the gap between what was written and what could have been written is concrete rather than a number.
Five alternative headlines in five angles, a subhead, a call-to-action line, and a line-by-line edit for each of the five dimensions — written only from facts already on jargonindex.com, gated like a rating (anything with a struck word is dropped, not sold). Delivered on a private page in about a minute.
Five dimensions on one ladder — 5 · 20 · 35 · 50 · 65 · 80 · 95 — weighted clarity 30%, specificity 20%, jargon 20%, proof 15%, call to action 15%. For each: the rung the page matched, the words that drove it, and what would reach the next rung. Full rubric →
The page lacks a concrete product noun in the main message; it asks a question rather than stating a product category.
What do you actually sell?
Next rungReplace the headline with a concrete product noun or product category in plain words.
The page includes a measurable outcome: the process of rating lives on the homepage with a time claim.
Free. Scored live from the homepage in about 30 seconds
Uses abstract terms and domain buzzwords around the concept of clarity and indexing, which adds jargon relative to a plain description.
Scored from the page as a whole; no single line was cited.
Next rungremove non-informative abstractions and clearly name the product category.
The page lists company names and some metrics, but no single, verifiable customer metric anchors the entire page.
They provide payments processing and related financial services to help businesses monetize transactions.
Next rungInclude a clear, verifiable metric or named example tied to the page’s claim, visible on the page.
There is a clear action to engage (Rate a company now), aligned with the page’s purpose.
Rate a company now
Next rungAdd a direct sign-up or try-now CTA tied to a specific feature or product.
What do you actually sell?Shows the headline but not a concrete product category.
Rate a company nowDirect CTA aligned with the page’s action.
They provide a scalable Postgres-based backend for apps and agents, including authentication, storage, serverless functions, and an AI gateway.Example of concrete product-related description that is present in the page.
The Jargon Index — A public index of how clearly companies explain what they sell. Sectors ai 1 commerce 1 data 6 design 1 devtools 6 fintech 2 infrastructure 5 marketing 1 productivity 2 security 1 What do you actually sell? We strike out every word on a homepage that carries no information. What is left is the product. Most companies have very little left. Rate a company now Rate it Free. Scored live from the homepage in about 30 seconds, then added to the index. 26 Rated 68.5 Mean 1 Below 50 The index — ranked by clarity Struck text carries no information 01 Neon data · neon.tech “Neon — Postgres backends for apps and agents” They provide a scalable Postgres-based backend for apps and agents, including authentication, storage, serverless functions, and an AI gateway. clar 95 spec 95 jarg 95 proo 65 cta 80 88 GRADE A 02 Clerk devtools · clerk.com “Clerk | Authentication and User Management” Clerk provides authentication and user management for apps. spec 65 jarg 65 76 GRADE B 03 Sentry devtools · sentry.io “Application Performance Monitoring & Error Tracking Software | Sentry -->” Sentry provides application performance monitoring and error tracking software. 04 Shopify commerce · shopify.com “Shopify: The All-in-One Commerce Platform for Businesses - Shopify” Shopify provides tools to build and manage online and in-person stores, including payments, shipping, and cross-channel selling. clar 50 proo
Strongest: Specificity 95. Weakest: Clarity 20. The 4 passes agreed within 18 points.
No word in the headline itself was judged empty, yet jargon-free scores 65: the scorer found generic phrasing further down the page. Uses abstract terms and domain buzzwords around the concept of clarity and indexing, which adds jargon relative to a plain description.
Badges are issued to grades A and B. The share card for this page shows the headline with its jargon struck through; paste the URL anywhere that unfurls links.
Scored from the live homepage
on 2026-10-10 by gpt-5-nano,
4 independent passes, median taken.
Page snapshot b37c5015575a.
Rubric 5abbca9a (current; what it says).
No person reviewed or edited this score. If the rubric and the score disagree, the rubric wins
and the page is re-scored — not hand-corrected.
Re-scored when the homepage text changes.