Ranked by what each change is worth on the composite — the gap to the next rung of the ladder times the dimension’s weight. Computed from the scores, not written by the model; the model’s sentence under each is the action.
Mention a concrete product noun (e.g., analytics platform, product analytics) or a specific product category in the headline.
Use plain language and reduce abstract buzzwords in the surrounding copy.
Place a direct CTA under the concrete product claim, such as 'Try Amplitude Analytics' or 'See it in action'.
All three together: 57 → 67. Every dimension one rung up: 69 (grade C). Ceiling is 95.
None published. The scorer’s suggestion either reused a word the index strikes (platform, solution, system…) or ran past twelve words, and the gate drops those rather than print them. It will try again at the next re-score.
Five alternative headlines in five angles, a subhead, a call-to-action line, and a line-by-line edit for each of the five dimensions — written only from facts already on amplitude.com, gated like a rating (anything with a struck word is dropped, not sold). Delivered on a private page in about a minute.
Five dimensions on one ladder — 5 · 20 · 35 · 50 · 65 · 80 · 95 — weighted clarity 30%, specificity 20%, jargon 20%, proof 15%, call to action 15%. For each: the rung the page matched, the words that drove it, and what would reach the next rung. Full rubric →
The headline describes an outcome with no concrete product category.
Amplitude | A new era for product teams
Next rungMention a concrete product noun (e.g., analytics platform, product analytics) or a specific product category in the headline.
Page includes quantified performance figures and usage metrics attached to outcomes.
Global Agent resolves 76% of customer issues on average across 4,900+ customers, with many already surpassing 85%.
Several abstract terms appear (AI, Agent, MCP) in the page, raising abstract-language density.
Nothing on the page addresses this.
Next rungUse plain language and reduce abstract buzzwords in the surrounding copy.
Contains named customers/logos but no accompanying numbers for those customers in the visible text.
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Next rungProvide a verifiable numeric metric tied to named customers (e.g., ‘Used by X customers, achieving Y outcome’).
There are actionable CTAs (e.g., Learn more, Start for free) that align with a potential next step for the user.
Learn more
Next rungPlace a direct CTA under the concrete product claim, such as 'Try Amplitude Analytics' or 'See it in action'.
Amplitude | A new era for product teamsSupports the lack of a concrete product noun in the main headline.
Global Agent resolves 76% of customer issues on average across 4,900+ customersDemonstrates presence of numbers attached to outcomes, supporting the high specificity score.
Amplitude | A new era for product teams Trusted by teams shaping the future Replit Clay Coinbase Cloudflare Character.AI Mercury NVIDIA Anthropic Granola Typeform Descript Midjourney Perplexity Synthesia Ramp Suno Figma Vercel One interface. All our capabilities. Global Agent pulls from everything Amplitude knows, the moment you ask. “ Why are new users dropping before setup? ” › “ Show me sessions where users got stuck. ” › “ What should we build next? ” › Why are new users dropping before setup? Analyzing signup-to-setup funnel (last 7d)... 67% of signups never start setup 3,241 signups / 1,847 setup starts this week Root cause: empty state at first login 31% exit within 90 sec, no action taken Analyze the data setup funnel Analyze the AI onboarding funnel Ask a follow up... Auto Seamless integration across all products: Product Analytics AI Feedback Marketing Analytics Agent Analytics Session Replay Experience Analytics Feature Experimentation Zoning Insights Web Experimentation Heatmaps Guides and Surveys Product Analytics Set up Amplitude where you build MCP SDK Claude Claude Code Cursor GitHub Copilot Windsurf Codex Gemini Figma Make Lovable Any MCP Tool View MCP setup docs Option 1: Paste the following prompt into your AI editor: Install the Amplitude Browser SDK for me. Run: npm install @amplitude/analytics-browser After it installs, read the Amplitude SDK docs and help me initialize tracking: https://amplitude.com/docs/sdks Option 2: Paste the following command into
Strongest: Specificity 95. Weakest: Clarity 20. The 4 passes agreed within 12 points. The band 51–63 is where a re-score of this unchanged page would most likely land: on 42 dry re-scores (12 Oct 2026) the median move was 6 points and one in four moved more than 10. A grade only changes when a new score clears the boundary by 5.
No word in the headline itself was judged empty, yet jargon-free scores 50: the scorer found generic phrasing further down the page. Several abstract terms appear (AI, Agent, MCP) in the page, raising abstract-language density.
Badges are issued to grades A and B. The share card for this page shows the headline with its jargon struck through; paste the URL anywhere that unfurls links.
Scored from the live homepage
on 2026-10-12 by gpt-5-nano,
4 independent passes, median taken.
Page snapshot 25b29c0daa7f.
Rubric 7329c240 (current; what it says).
No person reviewed or edited this score. If the rubric and the score disagree, the rubric wins
and the page is re-scored — not hand-corrected.
Re-scored when the homepage text changes.