Ranked by what each change is worth on the composite — the gap to the next rung of the ladder times the dimension’s weight. Computed from the scores, not written by the model; the model’s sentence under each is the action.
Replace the headline with a concrete product noun that matches Okta’s offering, e.g., 'Identity Security Software for Employees, Customers, and AI'.
All three together: 82 → 87. Every dimension one rung up: 86 (grade A). Ceiling is 95.
Built only from facts already on the page — not the company’s words. Shown so the gap between what was written and what could have been written is concrete rather than a number.
Five alternative headlines in five angles, a subhead, a call-to-action line, and a line-by-line edit for each of the five dimensions — written only from facts already on okta.com, gated like a rating (anything with a struck word is dropped, not sold). Delivered on a private page in about a minute.
Five dimensions on one ladder — 5 · 20 · 35 · 50 · 65 · 80 · 95 — weighted clarity 30%, specificity 20%, jargon 20%, proof 15%, call to action 15%. For each: the rung the page matched, the words that drove it, and what would reach the next rung. Full rubric →
The headline describes a category (identity) but not a concrete product noun; it uses an abstraction rather than a specific product name.
Secure Identity for Employees, Customers, and AI | Okta
Next rungReplace the headline with a concrete product noun that matches Okta’s offering, e.g., 'Identity Security Software for Employees, Customers, and AI'.
The page includes multiple quantified outcomes (e.g., 100M users, 99.9% onboarding speed), making claims concrete and verifiable.
100M users on one platform
No jargon terms are present in the main claim; the wording relies on plain nouns and verbs.
Scored from the page as a whole; no single line was cited.
The page names multiple named customers and metrics (e.g., Booking.com, 100M users), providing verifiable proof for claims.
100M users on one platform
The page includes a direct next step ('Start a free trial') aligned with the product claim.
Start a free trial
Secure Identity for Employees, Customers, and AI | OktaMain headline used to judge clarity and proof anchors.
100M users on one platformStrong quantitative proof of scale.
Start a free trialClear CTA aligned with the stated offering.
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Strongest: Specificity 95. Weakest: Clarity 50. The 2 passes agreed within 9 points.
No word in the headline itself was judged empty. That is rare: 12 of 128 companies in the index manage it.
Static SVG. No JavaScript, no tracking.
Scored from the live homepage
on 2026-10-12 by gpt-5-nano,
2 independent passes, median taken.
Page snapshot 3d8ab029cc00.
Rubric 5abbca9a (current; what it says).
No person reviewed or edited this score. If the rubric and the score disagree, the rubric wins
and the page is re-scored — not hand-corrected.
Re-scored when the homepage text changes.